Gurpreet Kaur

1.  The story starts from an argument between the couple related to their divorce and couple fights and the Mrs. Decker learned Voodoo and can hurt him using a little wax doll and with his hair and had a clear ending of the story. 2.  The ending of the story shows that it makes the story funny and surprising but Mr. Decker did not believe in Voodoo but was still careful and looked brave from their face but he still had some fear. 3.  When Mr. Decker says that Voodoo is fake and it’s nonsense, but he still does not like to take the risks and give his wife hairs anyway and this shows that he did not believe but he behaves careful. 4. The Last Train: The emotional climax of the story is that when a women in a red coat tells her that another train will come but Ella knows that there are no more trains and in this moment, she accepts that the man will never come back means for whom she is waiting at a station. The Stray Coin: The turning point in this story is that when the ma...

Rupinder Kaur or you can call by her nickname “Ruby”, who is hardworking girl with long curly hairs living in a new country far away from her home. She is doing two jobs in a cleaning company and also trying to do best in their studies. Life is not easy for everyone especially for Ruby after her father passed away. Ruby has their mother and brother responsibility on her for everything but still she never complained because she always believes that one day she will get success in their life by doing hard work and complete her all dreams with their family. I remembered she had discussed one incident with me that one day; while cleaning the 20th floor old office building, she walked toward a meeting room which looks dusty and the office looked like no one had used it for weeks. The chairs in the meeting room were not placed properly, the light did not work properly, and there was a thin layer of dust on a table. Firstly, she tied her long curly hairs and started wiping the table slowly g...

  Seaside Experience of me and my friend: My friend: “ The voice of the sea and waves are too much louder , don’t you think.” Me: “ Oh come on, I love the sound of the sea and even you know what it looks like water moves with the flow of waves which relaxes me.” My friend: “ Relax? I feel dangerous after looking toward those dark clouds and listening the sound of water and strong winds.” Me: “ You are looking these all things in another way, just try to relax mind and enjoy the beauty and play some games and eat something.” My friend: “ You and your imagination stories not again.” Me: “ hahaha, these are not stories…these all are part of my small journey.” My friend: “Okay, let’s try again and enjoy together.”

1. Exposition:   A young girl named Rupinder Kaur and her nickname is Ruby. She wants to become a successful girl and wants to complete their all family desires and you know what, she is an ‘Associates of Arts’ student. She works for long hours in a cleaning company but sometimes she failed in time management. 2. Rising Action:   Ruby always love to manage all the things by herself  but sometimes she failed to managed everything. One day, she got to know that she needs to work all over night and in the next morning, she will have exam in the college. 3. Climax: In everyone’s life, there is one person who always motivated to you as like that Ruby is always motivated by her family so she remembered everything where she did  their all efforts to get win and on that day as well, she talked with their manager who is also a international student and understood the Ruby’s situation and helped her. 4. Falling Action: By talking with their manager, Ruby changed her shift with...

  1.  My biggest takeaway from this class was that setting is also crucial to make the story more creative and setting can also affect the characters and emotions of the story with the use of all the five senses such as sight, sound, smell, touch and taste. Moreover, the story looks more realistic with the use of all these senses like in my seaside settings image, I make my story more creative after looking toward that image that the people love to enjoy that view and also spend their leisure time with their family members and the brightness of the image shows that the weather is too hot. In addition to this, the person just need to use their imagination skills so that readers can get to know everything just from the images and there is no need to write or explain too much about something to make creative story. 2.  In my future, I will try to more focused on setting so that I can provide all the information for the readers in detail and to connect properly with the chara...

  1. I learned a lot of things about creativity or deepening a character that telling a story or creating a story is a different thing make the strong and real characters in a story help to build the interest of the readers. Moreover, the writer needs to add some suspense in the story to make it more interesting. Apart from this, the readers will know about some things in the story after looking towards the images in the story before reading like one of the example from our lecture is that the Lila had sketch book in their hand and wears a necklace which describes about her personality and emotions. Therefore, images in the story gives the data about the small things in the story. 2. The things which I learned helps me a lot in future stories like If I want to make my own story so I will add the things which automatically attracts the readers towards it. Furthermore, I will also try to use the imagination skills in my story which helps the readers to learn what I am trying to say i...