Stories


1. The story starts from an argument between the couple related to their divorce and couple fights and the Mrs. Decker learned Voodoo and can hurt him using a little wax doll and with his hair and had a clear ending of the story.

2. The ending of the story shows that it makes the story funny and surprising but Mr. Decker did not believe in Voodoo but was still careful and looked brave from their face but he still had some fear.

3. When Mr. Decker says that Voodoo is fake and it’s nonsense, but he still does not like to take the risks and give his wife hairs anyway and this shows that he did not believe but he behaves careful.



4. The Last Train: The emotional climax of the story is that when a women in a red coat tells her that another train will come but Ella knows that there are no more trains and in this moment, she accepts that the man will never come back means for whom she is waiting at a station.

The Stray Coin: The turning point in this story is that when the man tries to give that coin back to the young woman but she ignores him and on that time, he feels unseen. But after that, the man knows about the coin which is meaningful. 

5. The Last Train: It is implied that Ella holds her past for a long time but now she knows the truth that the man left her life and Ella finally ready to move on in her life.

The Stray Coin: It is implied that the old man feels alone and forgotten but a small coin realizes that man he still matters.

6. The Last Train: The Silver Ring which Ella touches.

That ring reminds her that someone give her that ring and never come back and even she is just waiting for just one moment to see that person so there is hope, pain, and wait for long time of Ella for that particular man and at last, her decision to move on in her life.

The Stray Coin: The coin which the old man picks up.

It is important as the old man feels lonely but the small coin create a moment in his life which makes the old man to feel seen and not forgotten.

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